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eBook ☆ Raze Scarred Souls á Scarred Souls Read ¿ Tillie Cole ¿ TO TAKE BACK LIFE ONE MUST FIRST FACE DEATHConditioned in captivity to maim to kill and to slaughter prisoner 818 becomes an unrivaled and unstoppable fighter in the ring Violence is all he knows After years of incarceration in an unIn her constant surveillance Kisa stumbles across a tattooed scarred but stunningly beautiful homeless man on the streets Something about him stirs feelings deep within her; familiar yet impossibly forbidden desires He doesn't talk Doesn't communicate with anyoneHe's a man beyond saving But Kisa becomes obsessed with him Yearns for him Craves his touch Needs to possess this mysterious man this man they call Ra 25 Stars He was as cold as an arctic winter but he was a beautiful monster After so many friends raved to me about how amazing this book was I was beyond excited to be finally reading it Given that I've also spent uite a few months avoiding it Why Because my picky Russian ass has yet to read a book with the MCs being Russian and not having it be butchered to hell and back So I get a little touchy I have to say I was very impressed with the way the author accurately portrayed the Bratva and the true brutal underbelly of it The concept and the story were intriguing violent intense and gripping The book kept my attention the entire time reading it But unfortunately there were too many issues that I had along with it that ultimately killed my buzzBe warnednitpicking galore to follow The character's namesFirst we have Kisa But here's the thing; I've never heard of a name like this in Russian Ever It is a very common term of endearment however It loosely translates to pussy cat or kitten Whatever your fancy But here's the issue Kisa's fiance likes to call her Myshka which translates to 'little mouse'Yeah Threw me too The writingOK look I know I'm picky here but this just didn't work for me in the least I found some parts of the book to be choppy It goes from incredibly emotional and gritty to borderline cheesy Like this phrase herePlease sit papasWhy on earth would someone say Please sit fathers Unless you're in church But again that's neither here nor there My main issue came with the dialogue internal and external The repetitive terminology especially within the character's dialogue managed to frustrate me enough to take me out of the story at timesThe overuse of endearments and names within one paragraph being my main issue I get it; she's your Myshka your Solnyshko and he's tvoya lyubov I just don't want it repeated ad nauseam feel meAlso in Russian culture you never refer to someone respectfully especially of authority by their first name So you would never call your employer Mr Alik You'd refer to him by his first and middle name so Alik Abramovich in the case here But again that's neither here nor there The heroine Nothing about Kisa worked for me She was bland to the point of blending in with the furniture There was nothing about her that grabbed me as a reader or endeared me She was weak and her simple acceptance of things just being what they are and such is life did nothing for me either Don't get me started on her vagina's pavlov response to the mere presence of Raze The woman would walk into a room see his back without knowing it's him and already she's raring to goTaking into consideration her borderline abusive psycho of a fiancé and their relationship I'm shocked she had no emotional or mental scars This is especially true towards the end She moves on from all of it without so much as a bat of a eye lash No lingering emotional traumajust is what it isThe overuse of the word channelPerhaps this is just me but I have never once referred to my southern region as a channel during internal monologue during sex So the fact the Kisa thinks how her clenching channel wrapped around his cock made me wonder if perhaps she was a victorian maiden in her past lifeThe overuse of endearmentsConsidering the gritty and brutal subject matter of this book I can understand why the author would want to dilute that with a beautiful love story However I just can't picture any person in their late 20s referring to the other as my love on a constant and consistent basis I'm talking about multiple times during one sex scene Perhaps it's my inner cynic kicking in but this was just too much cheese for meThe graphic sex scenes with Kisa's fianceI'm not a reader that has an issue of a graphic sex scene with a person that's not the main love interest in a romance Especially not when it fits the plot as it did here That being said it didn't need to be as often or as graphic as it was here After the first time I didn't see a reason for it Yes I get it Alik is brutal and sadisctic He feels that Kisa is his property and he goes absolutely batshit at another man so much as looking at her I do NOT want to be reading about this than I need to which was for basically view spoilerover half the book hide spoiler

Tillie Cole ó reader

TO TAKE BACK LIFE ONE MUST FIRST FACE DEATHConditioned in captivity to maim to kill and to slaughter prisoner 818 becomes an unrivaled and unstoppable fighter in the ring Violence is all he knows After years of incarceration in an underground hell only one thought occupies his mind revenge bloody slow and violent revenge Revenge on the man who wronged him Kisa Volkova is the only daughter of Kirill 'The Silenc 111215 Re Read for Reap because I started it and was like What fuckery is this again Need a refresher3 Predictable StarsSo I am definitely in the minority on this oneWhile it was definitely a decent read I just didn't love it It was simplyin my opinion anywayRaze was hot But Kisa was kind of flat and boring in my opinionMuch like this pencil She just kind of went along with whichever way the wind blew No matter who was blowing it Mainly though the story was just too predictable I knew how this thing was gonna end VERY early on like less than 5% in Sometimes that works for me and I don't mind so long as the journey to get to that known ending is good But for the entirety of this story instead of feeling like thisor even like thisI felt like thisIn fact because it was so predictable I often felt my mind wandering a bitAll in all still a decent read Just not my favorite thing from Ms Cole XXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXX10 MORE DAYSXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXI want it so bad

ePub ¹ Scarred Souls ó Tillie Cole

Raze Scarred Souls #1Er' Volkov head of the infamous 'Red' bosses of New York's Russian Bratva Her life is protected In reality it's a virtual prison Her father's savage treatment of his rivals and his lucrative and coveted underground gambling ring The Dungeon ensures too many enemies lurk at their door She dreams to be set free Kisa has known only cruelty and loss in her short life While working for her church the only reprieve FOUR STARSBR with my Beautiful Bestie Fighter 818 has lived in the dark and hellish Gulag prison since he was a young teenage boy Forced to fight in Death Matches and being pumped full of drugs to bulk him up and fill him with rage Electric shock therapy has also been forced upon him to make him lose the memories of whom he once was He's had one purpose running through his mind that kept him going and it was etched on his prison cell wallAlik Durov Brooklyn New York Revenge KillAll he knows is that this is the man who falsely accused him of murder and who is the reason he was sent to the Gulag He plans to fight against Alik in a death match at The Dungeon and this is where he will get his revengeKisa Volkova is the daughter of the Pakhan the top boss of the Bratva Russian Mafia She is engaged to the man Fighter 818 is out to kill She is trapped in a very abusive relationship and every day is haunted by the memories of the beautiful boy she loved with all her heart A boy named Luka Tolstoi who was the only son of one of the Bratva kings Everyone thinks he died when he was 14 in a bus accident but turns out he's the guy out for revenge against Kisa's fianceThe two will meet in a dark alley where Kisa is handing out meals to homeless people for her Church that she does volunteer work for 818 aka RAZE comes to her rescue as she is about to be attacked by a robber Kisa and Raze have an instant connection Something about his eyes is so familiar to herThey manage to get some stolen moments together and Kisa soon figures out that Raze is her one and only love Luka He sees her in his dreams but has trouble putting things all together in his head When the sexy times finally happen let me just say it is heartbreaking and then soon it is incredibly steamy We find out some things that happened to Luka that just ripped my heart apartThis book had a lot of extremely violent scenes and there was one in particular that had me praying for a slow and painful death for Alik But there was also a beautiful love story in here too A story about two people who were made for each other Whose souls would find each other no matter what You can have me solnyshko You can have all of me You always have and you always will I really enjoyed this one but something was missing I can't really place my finger on it Was it predictable Yes But it was still entertaining The only other thing that I had a problem with was the Epilogue My Bestie pointed out that it was too short It felt rushed We would have liked to see where Kisa and Luka are at years later but we didn't get that insight