KINDLE ↠ Ù Peyton Elizabeth
S her in the sensual and strict hands of Lane and Ross Ellison who train her to be their ideal submissive But when Becca’s fear of not being perfect weaves its way into their lives she sets out to be just that and unknowingly risks losing it allNote There is no sexual relationship or touching for titillation between or among siblin Loved the set up Fraternal twins Ross and Lane Ellison turn to Kennedy Van Camp owner of Safeword LLC to find them the perfect sub to share Kennedy chooses to set them up with Becca an inexperienced natural submissive that she knows will be perfect for themThe scenes are well done The Doms are hot and the sex is too Although there are only a few scenes with actual intercourse The series shows a lot of promise but this one wasn't amazing It lacked emotional depth between the characters Something you need if they are going to start tossing the L word around The h Becca had REALLY low self esteem She was weak naive and easily manipulated I don't mind characters like that so long as they learn and grow stronger by the end of the book Unfortuneately Becca doesn't seem to grow much Something that is glaringly obvious towards the end And the ending O Ho Ho man the ending ticked me off My eyes were rolling so much I am surprised they didn't fall out of my headI am going to continue with the series I just hope the next has a stronger h and emotional depth
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The First Order Safeword LLC #1 G she expects is to meet a mysterious woman who assures that she can make Becca’s dream a reality Is there really a company called Safeword LLC that places submissive women with dominant men per their preferences on a simple application?Knowing she has nothing to lose Becca fills out the form on wwwsafewordllccom Her placement land Disclosure This ebook was provided to me free of charge through for the sole purpose of an honest review All thoughts comments and ratings are my ownFirst of all I would like to say I am a big fan of Ms Elizabeth's other series Menagecom so I was thrilled when she offered me a copy of this book to reviewThe book cover is always the first impression of the book I love a sexy steamy cover with hotties to drool over so this one was disappointing I hate the Fifty Shades trend of cover art I have an ereader so I can read naughty books anywhere and have sexy cover models to imagine as the heroesI really like the concept for this new series an agency that places Submissives with Doms It is really intriguing The downside is that this first book feels rather remedial I am a fan of the genre so I know a lot about it from reading other books and this was very educationalBecca is a really well thought out character who is new to the lifestyle The whole premise of her book deals with training that lends to the BDSM 101 feel of the story There is great detail for anybody who is curious about the lifestyle and the author really gets into the mindset of the characters Logan and Ross were really interesting but I wish they could have been dynamic They felt one dimensional to me until the end when they showed range They also fell flat in a few conversations The situation they were talking about felt unrealistic it was for the reader to gain information than a real talk between brothersThe steam was scene play and less intercourse The scenes were really detailed and it was interesting to see how they played out I usually enjoy books with lighter play and a brattiersassier gal I was not put off by the BDSM but it was not a style I am usually into It gave me of an insight into the lifestyle The training was much involved than I would have expectedThis story was not so much about romance Actually there was very little I would have loved about the time they shared together and how the feeling blossomed The feelings felt secondary at times Perhaps it is realistic to the lifestyle but I prefer romance in my eroticaAll the critiues aside there was enough story to have my crying over their relationship So something had to have been right Ms Elizabeth also did a terrific job of drawing you into future books of the series She gave a taste of several great personalities that I am dying to hear about I am definitely intrigued and will be waiting less than patiently for the next book This was a good start and I have great hopes for the future of this series