Book Ñ Just a Groom Hearts Horse Trials #1 308 pages ↠ Naturaltreatment

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Book Ñ Just a Groom Hearts Horse Trials #1 308 pages ↠ Naturaltreatment ↠ Elsa Aldridge pours her blood sweat and tears into being the best possible groom that she can be for up and coming event rider Sophia Hamilton But when fellow competitor Frederick Twemlow snatches away their top horse everS to make eyes at Elsa they both know it's only a matter of time before Frederick gets what he wants Desperate to despise him for tipping their yard into turmoil and to prove her loyalty to Sophia; for how long can Elsa resist his charm Really didn't like this at first found the dynamics between Elsa and Frederick to be weird and off putting The second half was much improved and I found myself rooting for the relationship This definitely needs an editor though Improper word choice sentence fragments bad speech grammar etc

Book ☆ Just a Groom Hearts Horse Trials #1 Æ Laurie Twizel

Elsa Aldridge pours her blood sweat and tears into being the best possible groom that she can be for up and coming event rider Sophia Hamilton But when fellow competitor Frederick Twemlow snatches away their top horse everything they ha I enjoyed reading this book through kindle unlimited However I would have been slightly disappointed if I had bought itPositives first it was great to read a book set in the UK eventing scene I really enjoyed the setting and it is obvious that the author knows and loves horsesI also found myself caring about the main character even if I wanted to shake her for bring so stubborn and uick to judge But I cared enough to want to shake herSlight criticism I would have liked to spend time with the leading man He was a bit of a cipher and his actions weren't always consistentNegatives this book would benefit hugely from a good editor There are a number of places were the author has used a word which is similar but not the same as the one she meant eg bare for bear which was jarring A good editor would also help tidy up and tighten the storyBut given the opportunity I would read the next one when it is released and I hope the author keeps writing and sharing her stories with us

Mobi Just a Groom Hearts Horse Trials #1

Just a Groom Hearts Horse Trials #1Ve ever worked for is on the brink of falling apart before their eyes Frederick Twemlow is gorgeous rich popular and at the top of the eventing ranks When he sets his sights on something he doesn't stop until he gets it So when he begin This was an interesting angle to take the groom instead of the up and coming eventer And it could have been good if it had been given a really REALLY thorough editingWords are misused predecessor instead of successor was one that's stuck with me and the romance is unbalanced with characters not properly developedBut I made it to the end so it must have had something It's just a shame that something wasn't an editor